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Pony POV Series: 'A shaggy dog...' Alt.POV SA6
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I crawl through the open window... I mean try to, but-
Yaaaahhh!
I sit and rub my muzzle. Ah, I think this will hurt even more tomorrow. But can't cry now, can't let my brother down, I chose to do this.
He was very angry when they picked me, but why? I want to show him I can do this. Nothing like this happens every day. Isn't he proud of me?
Have to focus, have to find the room...
I look down the dark hall: empty. Yes, I can see okay with no light, maybe even better if that light were not shining at me... Wait, where did that light..?
No that's not... it isn't, it can't, why would, how could-but they said-but it was-but-it-shouldn't-but-it-is-but-he-AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
Quickly, I take my pistol and shoot... into the wall next to me. Mierda.
That big, angry stallion is getting closer! Come on, come on, reload... I curse, it's broken!
They gave me a gun just in case, just in case someone finds me, but only one shot?
No time to think - have to escape! I throw the gun away and jump out the window. I try not to trip.
Puppy POV Series
Caught Part 1/2
"A shaggy dog..."
Written By ???????
Outside, away from the embassy is the cart they said would be there to get me.
The cart pullers see me fall out the window and slide across the street, but then they start to gallop away.
"Stop!" But they do not stop. And I do not stop calling. Why are they running faster?
It hurts, but I can't cry now, can't cry now...
No, there's no way they would just leave me like this!
Now he comes for me, I hear him.
What would my brother do? I do not know - I have to find my brother.
I can't let him stop me.
I go through the streets. The good thing is they are easy for me to run through at night. The bad thing? Easy for him too, he's right behind me!
By another embassy, Tianannese maybe, I go over a fence, hoping it will slow him more than me.
I look back, then stop. That guard, what an idiot. Hey dumbass! That's not how you climb a fence! You-Ugh. Why can't you just give up and go away?
Over more fences and down the road, have to be halfway across the town by now. He is still failing over every fence, too. Falling, I mean. Sorry, my Equestrian is bad.
Scared? I'm not scared of this guy, he's too dumb to be scared of.
Tired? Yes, he is still following me! Guards, all they do is chase. They are idiots, but they do not give up!
But still, he would not follow me into a dark tunnel filled with fast trains, yes?
No, they did - huh, two of them?!
Bah.
I climb up to the platform, breathing hard. Almost there... Then I hear a horn ahead... but that means a train, but that means-
Hot steam rushes into my lungs. I scream, but nothing comes out. On the ground, in all my mind I beg, please just make it stop. Every breath is like swallowing a knife, a burning hot knife. They get closer, but it hurts, it hurts, it hurts!
I hear gunshots, and a familiar paw pulls me up to my feet. He gives me a smack on the back, I cough.
"Pedro, come on, we must escape," he speaks.
Through the tunnels, on the tracks we run, his tail guides me along. I am still coughing, and a bitterness fills my mouth, but I am running too hard to care.
We reach the depot. Did we escape? No, I still hear them following us!
My brother hears them as well.
"Take Chico and Luis and warn the others," he says. He tears the cover off a train carriage with his claws, revealing a strange machine.
"But bro-" I ask.
We see them - They see us! Chico takes out his pistol, but they shoot it before he can.
"If the Columbians catch you, they will kill you! Now go!" A red tornado flies out from the machine at them, hitting their shield and making them hide behind a train.
"I will come after I am done with our amigos! Go! I am covering you!"
While they are pinned, we run like he told us.
One of them shoots at my brother, but it just bounces off a metal shield on the machine. My brother can block bullets too, you know.
"SAY HELLO TO MY LITTLE FRIEND!" He yells out over the loud roar of gun fire. The bullets eat away their cover, cracks form on their shield!
Knowing he will be okay, I turn my head away and run out the exit after Chico and Luis.
Suddenly, the gun fire stops.
Yaaaahhh!
I sit and rub my muzzle. Ah, I think this will hurt even more tomorrow. But can't cry now, can't let my brother down, I chose to do this.
He was very angry when they picked me, but why? I want to show him I can do this. Nothing like this happens every day. Isn't he proud of me?
Have to focus, have to find the room...
I look down the dark hall: empty. Yes, I can see okay with no light, maybe even better if that light were not shining at me... Wait, where did that light..?
No that's not... it isn't, it can't, why would, how could-but they said-but it was-but-it-shouldn't-but-it-is-but-he-AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
Quickly, I take my pistol and shoot... into the wall next to me. Mierda.
That big, angry stallion is getting closer! Come on, come on, reload... I curse, it's broken!
They gave me a gun just in case, just in case someone finds me, but only one shot?
No time to think - have to escape! I throw the gun away and jump out the window. I try not to trip.
Puppy POV Series
Caught Part 1/2
"A shaggy dog..."
Written By ???????
Outside, away from the embassy is the cart they said would be there to get me.
The cart pullers see me fall out the window and slide across the street, but then they start to gallop away.
"Stop!" But they do not stop. And I do not stop calling. Why are they running faster?
It hurts, but I can't cry now, can't cry now...
No, there's no way they would just leave me like this!
Now he comes for me, I hear him.
What would my brother do? I do not know - I have to find my brother.
I can't let him stop me.
I go through the streets. The good thing is they are easy for me to run through at night. The bad thing? Easy for him too, he's right behind me!
By another embassy, Tianannese maybe, I go over a fence, hoping it will slow him more than me.
I look back, then stop. That guard, what an idiot. Hey dumbass! That's not how you climb a fence! You-Ugh. Why can't you just give up and go away?
Over more fences and down the road, have to be halfway across the town by now. He is still failing over every fence, too. Falling, I mean. Sorry, my Equestrian is bad.
Scared? I'm not scared of this guy, he's too dumb to be scared of.
Tired? Yes, he is still following me! Guards, all they do is chase. They are idiots, but they do not give up!
But still, he would not follow me into a dark tunnel filled with fast trains, yes?
No, they did - huh, two of them?!
Bah.
I climb up to the platform, breathing hard. Almost there... Then I hear a horn ahead... but that means a train, but that means-
Hot steam rushes into my lungs. I scream, but nothing comes out. On the ground, in all my mind I beg, please just make it stop. Every breath is like swallowing a knife, a burning hot knife. They get closer, but it hurts, it hurts, it hurts!
I hear gunshots, and a familiar paw pulls me up to my feet. He gives me a smack on the back, I cough.
"Pedro, come on, we must escape," he speaks.
Through the tunnels, on the tracks we run, his tail guides me along. I am still coughing, and a bitterness fills my mouth, but I am running too hard to care.
We reach the depot. Did we escape? No, I still hear them following us!
My brother hears them as well.
"Take Chico and Luis and warn the others," he says. He tears the cover off a train carriage with his claws, revealing a strange machine.
"But bro-" I ask.
We see them - They see us! Chico takes out his pistol, but they shoot it before he can.
"If the Columbians catch you, they will kill you! Now go!" A red tornado flies out from the machine at them, hitting their shield and making them hide behind a train.
"I will come after I am done with our amigos! Go! I am covering you!"
While they are pinned, we run like he told us.
One of them shoots at my brother, but it just bounces off a metal shield on the machine. My brother can block bullets too, you know.
"SAY HELLO TO MY LITTLE FRIEND!" He yells out over the loud roar of gun fire. The bullets eat away their cover, cracks form on their shield!
Knowing he will be okay, I turn my head away and run out the exit after Chico and Luis.
Suddenly, the gun fire stops.
Every story has another side. Let's see where they meet and what we get.
A recursive fan-fic for the Pony POV Series by
, though it was inspired by a chapter that :
: wrote, Shining Armor 6.
A recursive fan-fic for the Pony POV Series by
, though it was inspired by a chapter that :: wrote, Shining Armor 6. © 2012 - 2024 r1ck3t
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What about Yoshi64's comedy chat where Makarov retconned Shining Armor into a mare (with only Shining and Cadence and other divines aware of the change) and Shining humiliated of course, while Cadence talking with her hand maidens freaks out because this might mean she took a filly to her high school prom.